Thursday, April 14, 2011

Journal #6

The Gifts


Knock Knock Knock


The door was open.
I came in the house followed by uncertain whispers




I met a red child. 
The child gave me a reddish passion.

I met an orange child. 
The child gave me a scarlet flutter.

I met a yellow child.
The child gave me a sunlight pleasure.

I met a green child.
The child gave me an emerald peace.

I met a blue child.
The child gave me an azure dream.

I met a navy child.
The child gave me a cobalt blue endurance.

I met a purple child.
The child gave me a violet nostalgia.



The gifts that they left became a seed.
The seed bloomed a rainbow flower.





The rainbow petals of the flower blossomed in my heart. 


Posted by at

10 comments:

  1. InstructorBriApril 14, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    This poem gave me chills, Dabin! I loved how you color coded it. It shows such wonderful imagery woven within a story that others can also feel within themselves. Keep writing poetry!!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Arif AbbassiApril 14, 2011 at 4:07 PM

    Hi Dabin,
    I think this wonderful writing reflects you personality
    please don't stop writing and go forward
    waiting for your story

    ReplyDelete
  3. Dabin KimApril 14, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    Thank you very much Ms. Bri and Arif :)
    Your cheerful comments motivated me to have a passion for writing.
    Also, I am so glad that you have enjoyed my poem. Thank you for reading my poetry and see you tomorrow in the class :) Good night~

    ReplyDelete
  4. faisal almarriApril 18, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    thoughtful, very nice

    ReplyDelete
  5. Rushud. OmarApril 18, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Rushud. OmarApril 18, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    that was a nice poem

    ReplyDelete
  7. marsApril 19, 2011 at 5:53 PM

    wow@@@make me so excited..nice poem....

    ReplyDelete
  8. LittlePandaApril 20, 2011 at 4:37 AM

    A very colorful poem. :)

    ReplyDelete
  9. Dabin KimApril 21, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    Thank you all of us!

    ReplyDelete
  10. aureApril 21, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    Good job! You are very creative

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)